Originally Posted by Paris Holley

it would be better if the text placement and style was re done, that way its currently setup hurts it

its kinda hard to pull off white on yellow, and the nav just kinda hurts to look at, maybe by increasing the text size on the nav itll standout more

imo, there should be a small bit of grey at the top somewhere, half the layout is all orange then it just drops to grey, give it some way to transition to a differen't color than just having it like BAM!

overall tho i would say just work on your text placement and style techniques because it can turn a layout from a 10 to a 2 real quick..