Needs alot of work, I wouldn't have released it until it was half decent. Based on that I wouldn't bother downloading another one, get it offline and try again.

It was bad for many reasons, mainly because it was hard to hear what was going on (talking far away from the mic?) also didn't really seem as though you knew what you were doing in the beginning.

Oh and another thing, I never expected you to sound like that lol...sounds like your voice hasn't broke or something.