If the person is satisfied, then there's not much more you can do Charllie. Personally, I like the creativity, but it is hard to grasp the concept when it's difficult to read the letters. In all of your graphics, there's always going to be one or two that others don't care for. It's life, but if the person you're doing it for is happy, then you've did your part. There's not much more you can do.