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03-23-2005, 10:05 PM
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  Old  Good info, but heed your own advice.

Very good info, but I would run a spellcheck on your kooshin.com site.

Just an example:

"We have started our web hosting business back in 2000 . Abdillahi Adam Abdillahi found it .
From the year 2000-2003 ,Our company's name was not kooshin.com ,but we used another name and at the end of the year 2003 we changed it to kooshin.com." :: grammar and punctuation errors all over the place ::

Should be:

"Kooshin.com, founded by Abdillahi Adam Abdillahi, has been providing web hosting solutions for five years." :: much more concise and to the point ::


I understand that English is probably not your native tongue. This is why you may want an english student to check your spelling, grammar and punctuation. I would be willing to help if you would like.

Eric
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