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11-26-2010, 08:58 AM
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Hi Ryan. It's a good start. My thoughts on what you might want to improve on (design-wise):
• I think the font used is a little too light and thin. I know you want it to look like your business card but maybe you could mix it up with another font. I think the contrast would also be good for the overall design. They're almost all the same size too.
• It's probably just me but I find it a little disconcerting when the navigation disappears. Maybe you could just make it lighter but still visible.
• Some of the text is hard to read when it falls against your background design. Try adding an opaque layer/change font/change color or place the text where it won't fall on the image.

Hope this helps