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01-29-2012, 11:14 PM
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The intended point of my tagline is actually supposed to intend sarcasm. When I actually give out business cards the first thing they point out to me is that they really like the tagline actually. But this may be because the tagline is shorted to "another graphic & web designer".

I guess that I have to try to convey this better through use of emphasis.
I would like your opinion on whether I should emphasise on the "just" or "just another" (with italics or quotation marks).
Or should I remove the "just"?
Or should I change the tagline entirely?

Thanks for your feedback.