Visual Representation!

I'd like to know how well I'm doing in this. Any good suggestions to improve this will be appreciated. I have until 12am to edit.

http://asmarterhost.com/userup/176/city_hall.jpg [ORIGINAL]

http://asmarterhost.com/userup/176/v...esentation.jpg [Project]

Thanks

Looks good so for. But, what is it for?

Visual Representation using lines and shapes and shade.

It looks really good, is this for an Art/Digital Art class or something of that sort?

I don't know if the goal was to make it as nice a possible or to make it look as much as the photo. But when the first thing applies, I suggest that you make it straight. The camera wasn't hold straight when making the photo, so maybe it's a good idea to correct this in your 'visual presentation'.

Just curious, but are those the Enron buildings?

No Julek, that's "city_hall.jpg"..
Enron: http://www.viracon.com/images/enronbuilding.jpg

Hehe, well they're both round and nice looking.
Brings back memories of that 'smartest guys in the room' movie.

Anyway, the shaded version looks excellent.

Originally Posted by achtentachtig I don't know if the goal was to make it as nice a possible or to make it look as much as the photo. But when the first thing applies, I suggest that you make it straight. The camera wasn't hold straight when making the photo, so maybe it's a good idea to correct this in your 'visual presentation'.

straight would be boring. Most ppl in class got awesome shots at great angles and my perspective of the building is what makes me atleast comparable to theirs.

Yes, this is for digital design class.

Thanks for all the comments so far, I'm glad it's looking good.

I would perfer it if you made the people in it. If its not too late...