Although I've not yet got anything to put into a portfolio, I've started to make the design for my website. I just want some user feedback as to what would make it look better
Remove the scan lines from the preview, they're pointless as it's an easy workaround if someone was to actually steal it. Once the scan lines are removed, might be able to actually see the template the way it's suppsoed to be and actually give comments.
good start but a long, long way to go. nothing really substantial here to review. you need to have more of a finished product in order for someone to give you real constructive criticism. keep at it!