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11-27-2005, 07:55 AM
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Right now there are only 3 pages up, more will come.
Check it out!
I don't really know what to say
Thanks!

11-27-2005, 08:10 AM
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Ok first things first, the loading time on the site was ridiculous.. It took me about 30 seconds before the main page came up.. Which on a 6mb connection is just too long..

As for the design, I assume that you were trying to make a simplistic, minimalistic design. Although, this one doesnt do a great job of portraying that, its not bad, just a little too "regular". I think the standardized image of clouds is just a bit too over-used now days. Im not saying clouds is bad, but the image you used is just seen too much. The links.. I dont understand why you used images for your links, both thelinks above and below the header image are very simple, and can be accomplished with simple CSS attributes. I also believe that although white-space is good, too much white-space can be bad.. And in this case, there's just too much. Overall the design is very simple, the colors are very bleak and there's just not enough to keep me interested in the site.

I guess that the overall design isn't bad in a minimalistic point-of-view.. I just few theres some minor details that if changed would help bring the whole design together. Good luck.

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Thank you, I will work on all what you said.
About the loading time, I do not understand.
Sounds very strange...

11-27-2005, 09:09 AM
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The header has WAY too much text.

11-27-2005, 10:26 AM
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like animus said , keep it with one line.
Loaded fast for me.
Your tagline : "not just good design"
you like that? cauze imo it doesn't attract me.
THe layout looks fresh and clean.

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simple but nice (not great but nice) add more into it,more looks.

11-27-2005, 04:30 PM
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Originally Posted by niek
like animus said , keep it with one line.
Loaded fast for me.
Your tagline : "not just good design"
you like that? cauze imo it doesn't attract me.
THe layout looks fresh and clean.
If I uploaded the services page, you will understand why I wrote that
And thank you, I appreciate your reviews.
I will delete some text in the banner

11-27-2005, 07:23 PM
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I think its very nice, you put in great work into this layout. You went with the simplistic style which makes it look clean cut and fresh. I think the header is fine, it is a bit crowded with the text but still looks nice.

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it is a nice & clean layout, but a bit over use

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Thank you Theodor, and thank you Nick
What do you mean by over use? Of what?

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