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WIP Little Cigar Template

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03-17-2006, 01:08 PM
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Just something I felt like doing, it's not for a client, but more for my own practice. I need suggestions, I kind of want to follow the humidor cigar box type look. The outside wavey borders where inspired by this cigar box...



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If it was me, i would probably want to lighten the colours, and Merge the Brown shape of the "box" with the mood texture, and then maybe just darken the edges. Dont get me wrong i think your design is good, but this is just my opinion. Otherwise good work.

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the square picture looks weird on the curvy edge, also, the colours are too intense, cigars are supposed to be relaxing

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I like the use of imagery, however im not feeling the scroll/curvy page design.

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Thanks for the suggestions!

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I like the idea but i think the wood texture could be improved.

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The border should have the same texture but darker, IMO. But lighten the whole thing up togethor and it needs a little more contrast. Nice idea and good work though

Maybe an inner shadow on the rectangle that has the content in?

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