Originally Posted by duffters
heres another go at it:
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I like that you gave the 'X' a bit more dimension here w/ the stripes. I think this font is a little difficult to read though, because it appears squished together, and presents the 'X' in a manner that almost looks like a capital 'H'. I'd rather see the 'X' looking sharper and not using a font that adds curves to it. Simple and edgy.
Edit: Something else I just noticed when comparing it to your first version is that in this one the text is almost contained w/in the blue bars. I liked the way the first one extended beyond them more significantly. I liked the way it looked w/ that extra "stretch" horizontally.