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03-12-2005, 06:40 AM
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 Just whipped this up ( another Coming soon page )
Hey everyone!
I just made this for a good friend of mine  . It took me around 10 minutes. Let me know what you think!
alterine.com
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03-12-2005, 07:16 AM
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that site looks awsome
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03-12-2005, 07:30 AM
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Not too bad Looks like it took about 10 minutes, probably could've looked a bit better with some more time.
Regards,
Patrick
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03-12-2005, 08:23 AM
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You know, you could have said something to actually help.... I actually took around 1 hour working on it... *rolls eyes* I mean, you are on the design team, and all you can say is spend more time? Thats very helpful......
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03-12-2005, 09:06 AM
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If you spent an hour on it then you didnt just whip it up. it looks alright. typography needs a lot of work. i dont feel as though the background pattern does the work any justice. Dosnt even relate to the image color wise. The janurary 1943 typo needs to be lowered about 10-15 pixels, the grass above it cuts off the top of the wording and makes it hard to read. I suggest losing the low opacity clock or phone thats in the middle, Just adds clutter in my opinion. I am having a hard time figureing out what the text in the bottom left says. "Check your daily good turn in the space below"? whats that mean? Thats bout it.
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03-12-2005, 11:20 AM
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Patrick is on the design team for his programming knowledge
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03-12-2005, 02:31 PM
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Great photography, however the typography ruins it a bit.
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03-12-2005, 02:48 PM
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the alterine.com completely ruins it imo, the rest is quite nice. . . take note of Tech-Four suggestions and it should be alot better - keep it up
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03-12-2005, 04:19 PM
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Thanks guys, alot of the other things are stamps, not words that I added in. Sorry, not stamps, brushes.
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