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06-08-2009, 11:11 AM
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Warning: These banners were done for a adult toy store so consider the material rated R!

The main purpose is to get viewers to click on them. Constructive criticism is most welcomed. I especially want to know what you thing of my use of typography/fonts. Which ones you think are great/horrible and why. Also, what areas of design you think I should research on that would really help.

Thanks so much.

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06-14-2009, 09:39 AM
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I posted this almost a week ago and no responses! Will no one say anything?!

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You need a different font-type on some things

Try use a badge or a ribbon that is spanned over the image "click me" or view more etc to jazz the image up


A clean background may look better then the patterns and stuff you have got going on.

Images are good, font just needs adjusting.

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Originally Posted by goldcoastalley View Post
You need a different font-type on some things

Try use a badge or a ribbon that is spanned over the image "click me" or view more etc to jazz the image up


A clean background may look better then the patterns and stuff you have got going on.

Images are good, font just needs adjusting.
Totally agree.

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@goldcoastalley and americantemplates - Thanks for the feedback! Could you guys give me an example of which images I should change the fonts? It would really help me out. Thanks!

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