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06-13-2008, 12:08 PM

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Gareth

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Consider me very impressed

But lose the scissors!

06-13-2008, 12:56 PM

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I'm impressed

It looks very professional, good work.

06-13-2008, 03:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Salathe

The actual content and some of the design decisions are really letting you down.

For the text on your page, I'd heartily suggest hiring a professional writer because I know at the moment you're going for "kind of casual" but actually getting bland and generic. There are also a number of grammar and spelling mistakes which any company, however casual, should do well to avoid.

This.

06-13-2008, 03:06 PM

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Waiting for a bigger, more critical .Nick comment

Anyway, a ****load better

06-13-2008, 03:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Eversuns

Waiting for a bigger, more critical .Nick comment

http://www.terribad.org/order/

06-14-2008, 11:30 AM

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I really like it

06-14-2008, 12:09 PM

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much more professional than your last design. The other one didn't do you justice. I hope u stick with this and build your brand. Good job!

agree about the grammar mistakes, doesn't project a good image.

06-14-2008, 12:20 PM

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Great site. Good luck growing your new business. Just remember do it with your heart and soul in it and what ever you do just done "half ass" it. After that you will be successful no matter what you do.

06-14-2008, 12:49 PM

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Just so you know - there is a spelling mistake on Jon Wheately's testimonial.