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12-21-2008, 11:36 PM
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I would like to announce the launch of Zippy Biz Cards, home of high-quality business cards at affordable prices.

1,000 business cards with full color on both sides, gloss on both sides, on 14pt stock is only $50. FREE SHIPPING to the US!

Moving on, how do you guys like the design? It was a quick put together since I wanted the technical part of it perfect so I didn't spend much time on the design but overall I think it is acceptable. I will be redesigning it very soon.

Let me know what you guys think!

12-22-2008, 12:16 AM
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You should get a designer to come in as quickly as possible. You want to attract people, not detract them.

12-22-2008, 12:21 AM
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Originally Posted by Aftermath View Post
You should get a designer to come in as quickly as possible. You want to attract people, not detract them.
I'm going to work on it tonight...like I said, it was a VERY quick design. For some strange reason I design other people's sites nicer than my own...I just can't design as well as I do for myself.

Anyone interested in redesigning for business cards?

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Originally Posted by lush View Post
I'm going to work on it tonight...like I said, it was a VERY quick design. For some strange reason I design other people's sites nicer than my own...I just can't design as well as I do for myself.

Anyone interested in redesigning for business cards?
I'm the same way! Not sure why that is.

Nice service, if I saw this earlier this week I would have used you.

12-22-2008, 04:50 AM
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How do you guys like this design?

zippybizcards.com/new

Let me know what you think...I want to get some input before I make it live. Oh and it's only that page for now.

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It's better than it was, but it's still not great. The logo looks, un-proffesional like it was put together with a web 2.0 generator script. The boxes have nothing special about it and the title of them looks ugly with the background changes. They need a bit of re-working. Also, the picture of the cards doesn't look so good.

You may want to either get a proper branding logo (look at www.logolize.com for some inspiration) or hire someone to design the logo.

As for the website, if you change about the things I said above, it would look better, not a huge improvement but it'll be bearable.

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I think it looks better, but it still looks unprofessional, especially the logo.

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you could hire me.
lol

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Originally Posted by rsek View Post
you could hire me.
lol
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I was working on it last night and after 4 drafts I think I have it down. It should be up online in a few hours

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