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Unique Proxy Design?

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01-24-2007, 10:06 PM
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Im new to this, so bare with me..

Please give me productive comments.

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:| What can i say? Its a tad pink... but the header seems pasted on, and hmm theres no real effect to it...

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Its a good atempt for your first! I think that you should think about the colour scheme, the pink and the yellow is abit harsh on the eyes! Also the text looks a bit squashed in the two boxes! but other than that i would say that its a nice simple design. Keep at the good work you will just get better and better!

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thanks for the comments, any more?

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I think you used to many colors, I'm also not a big fan of the styal. I think that's amazing for your first though (if it is your first). Ways you can improve....hmm.... I wouldn't use so many colors next time, I would also recomend you exparament with the "pen" tool, and try making fancy curves etc.

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Its to tacky, easy it up on the eyes a bit..

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