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Anarchy v2..

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05-08-2005, 06:20 PM
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Well just finished the coding ... i went through a bunch of prototypes before getting to this one.. i decided to go for a simple site .. more content based..
www.AnarchyStudio.com <--- The Design
well lets get some feedback..

05-08-2005, 06:29 PM
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It's quite simple, which isnt a bad thing. I like the logo it looks nice. I'm not a big fan of the background as it's more complicated then the site itself. The content heading you put under the content (flipped vertically) I just think its out of place although not a bad idea. Maybe try adding more padding to it, it's just too close to the text.

Other than that I think you accomplished your goal.

05-08-2005, 06:39 PM
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I liek it, though the logo seems 'jaggy' (pixelated)

05-08-2005, 07:29 PM
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ya i know im not sure why it got pixelated.. i tryed to fix it before ill try and fix it more later today though

05-08-2005, 07:32 PM
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I don't feel the Arial font size used in the content of your web site complements your design that well. Maybe a smaller Arial or even another font style altogether?

05-08-2005, 07:40 PM
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edit:
just refreshed it a couple of times, and theres a new design..
its good but maybe its a bit too simple...

05-08-2005, 09:35 PM
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Coding isn't too good the background to the design is nice, but i don't think you've blended the foreground well with it. It seems a little out of place, the main center part.

05-09-2005, 09:26 AM
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I like the concept, but not the content.

You have used a great concept but not carried it through to your content. You really need to get your content grammar checked as there are many errors. You also need to think a lot more client oriented.

What I mean is you should view your site through a visitors eyes, I am a visitor and I liked the layout but the content would make me go to a competitor with more honest opening statements. I knw you can probably do what you say but it is too unrealistic to believe.

Your slogan is difficult to understand, I know it is associative with the website title anarchy, but it has nothing to do with your business.

I would also expect a name like anarchy studios to be more on the cutting edge of design.

Your contact page font looks to be times new roman.

Your page does not validate: http://validator.w3.org/check?verbos.../portv2AS.html

I like the layout, I like the colour scheme, I just dont like the idea of anarchy selling web design services and your sites content.

05-09-2005, 04:39 PM
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I'm not a fan of the logo as such, it's a very overused text style that i'm seeing everywhere these days. What does it actually represent?

The background is too simple imo and the site is also very basic. I'm not sure if it's me but i'm getting some white/grey lines slicing through the image at the top and the middle (is that on purpose or an error?).

I have big issues with the typography used, looks very boring and doesn't entice me to read further, the link is default, make use of css to improve upon it's readability. There are some serious coding issues it has to be said, when pages load often a black background loads first for some reason....

I just clicked on your previous version of the site and I have to say, it looks alot better, why fix it if it isn't broken?

05-13-2005, 12:44 AM
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ok thanks for comments guys im going to go back to v1 since not many like it.. everyweekend i will be making a new site untill my b-day June 5th then i will be changing my Studio name..that way im not totally expected to have Red then once i get my new domain a new kooler site will be out.. thanks for the comments.. i think i just made v2 to try and get clients.. which i dont have any yet

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